Our imagination can do wonders that’s what I really believe in. This piece of poetry just happened. It’s extraordinary that without previous preparation, we can still write a poem. Here’s my imagination:-
I look up at the sky
I look at the ground
I sense someone around
walking on the ground
trying to see I bend down
I find someone looking at the town
I walk up to him with a smile
but for him it tasted like bile
he is a man in grief
that’s what he tells me in brief
has lost someone so dear
that he couldn’t even go near
he looks at me with those meek eyes
which are full of those lovely goodbyes
I ask him not to lose hope
& ask him to look up at the sky
so that he could reach high
I look up at the sky
I look on the ground to find no one around
was it just my imagination playing
with my perception
We all imagine something beautiful and out of the world , do share your imagination with me , I am eagerly waiting.
And do share what you think about this poem. I would love to know your opinion.
-Raoul
Loved it bro……Great work
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Thank you so much bro
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This was really well written! Your imagination is great!
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Thank you so much
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Imagination can do wonders… Albert Einstein became The Albert Einstein because of his imagination…. Lovely poem!! 😊😊
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Thank you . And so true stuff i completely agree with you. btw don’t mind the first two words lol
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What if I do?😛
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Then i will be very sad hehe
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Aww…. Nah I don’t you to be sad… I didn’t mind… But don’t it from next time.. 😃
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Ok i will keep that in mind , don’t worry
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👍✌
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Great image – the cave entrance is like an invitation to enter into a world of imaginings 🙂
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Yea indeed , thanks for taking out your time to read it
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Do you read poetries?
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Yea i try too what about you??
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I hate it many times when it doesn’t make me feel amazing
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Alright i get it lol.
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‘,: – /
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